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	<description>Life as a Writer of Fantasy Fiction</description>
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		<title>By: fsdthreshold</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-170</link>
		<dc:creator>fsdthreshold</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Jul 2008 16:55:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Carlos! No, there&#039;s no need to apologize! I&#039;m sorry I can&#039;t help you more directly, but I&#039;m glad you&#039;re looking in on this blog. I also hope I will be seeing your stories in print someday soon!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Carlos! No, there&#8217;s no need to apologize! I&#8217;m sorry I can&#8217;t help you more directly, but I&#8217;m glad you&#8217;re looking in on this blog. I also hope I will be seeing your stories in print someday soon!</p>
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		<title>By: Carlos</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-163</link>
		<dc:creator>Carlos</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 19:09:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I had a feeling you would answer that way.  I was just giving it a shot. I was not trying to take you as an agent or anything like that.  I&#039;m sorry if I disrepected you. I have been lucky enought with your comments and recomendations.  It was a pleasure talking to you.  You are a very polite person. Perhaps, one day you will get to read my stories.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I had a feeling you would answer that way.  I was just giving it a shot. I was not trying to take you as an agent or anything like that.  I&#8217;m sorry if I disrepected you. I have been lucky enought with your comments and recomendations.  It was a pleasure talking to you.  You are a very polite person. Perhaps, one day you will get to read my stories.</p>
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		<title>By: fsdthreshold</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-161</link>
		<dc:creator>fsdthreshold</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jun 2008 15:47:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Carlos,
I really wish you the best in every way as a writer, but I&#039;m really sorry--my life is just too crazily busy to take on the project of reading your story. However, I know for a fact that there are all kinds of on-line writers&#039; groups you could join that do exactly that: the members read and critique each others&#039; stories. If you&#039;re looking for feedback, I would highly recommend that. Just type &quot;on-line writers&#039; groups&quot; into your search engine, and you&#039;ll find all sorts of listings! (And if you&#039;re looking for markets for your stories, you really should check out that Ralan.com I mentioned!) Also, do you know about magazines such as _Writer&#039;s Digest_? The magazine comes out once a month, and it&#039;s really helpful--plus, they run a school called &quot;On-line Writers&#039; Workshops&quot; or something like that--the ads are in the magazine. (You may also want to consider attending a writers&#039; conference or workshop in your area--they&#039;re loads of fun and you meet lots of other writers and professionals in the industry--and you can get critiques of your work from writers, editors, agents, etc.)
     Best of luck to you! (And no, you&#039;re not annoying at all!)
     Fred</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Carlos,<br />
I really wish you the best in every way as a writer, but I&#8217;m really sorry&#8211;my life is just too crazily busy to take on the project of reading your story. However, I know for a fact that there are all kinds of on-line writers&#8217; groups you could join that do exactly that: the members read and critique each others&#8217; stories. If you&#8217;re looking for feedback, I would highly recommend that. Just type &#8220;on-line writers&#8217; groups&#8221; into your search engine, and you&#8217;ll find all sorts of listings! (And if you&#8217;re looking for markets for your stories, you really should check out that Ralan.com I mentioned!) Also, do you know about magazines such as _Writer&#8217;s Digest_? The magazine comes out once a month, and it&#8217;s really helpful&#8211;plus, they run a school called &#8220;On-line Writers&#8217; Workshops&#8221; or something like that&#8211;the ads are in the magazine. (You may also want to consider attending a writers&#8217; conference or workshop in your area&#8211;they&#8217;re loads of fun and you meet lots of other writers and professionals in the industry&#8211;and you can get critiques of your work from writers, editors, agents, etc.)<br />
     Best of luck to you! (And no, you&#8217;re not annoying at all!)<br />
     Fred</p>
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		<title>By: Carlos</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-159</link>
		<dc:creator>Carlos</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jun 2008 15:23:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dear Fred,

I am a fool! I didn&#039;t expect to hear from you again. I thought I had annoyed you enought.  God is really looking out for me.  I can&#039;t let this opportunity pass by so I must ask you, can I send you at least one of my stories? I don&#039;t expect you to find a publisher for me but an opinion would be great, especially coming from a writer like yourself. Now, I&#039;m really asking for too much but who knows you might say yes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dear Fred,</p>
<p>I am a fool! I didn&#8217;t expect to hear from you again. I thought I had annoyed you enought.  God is really looking out for me.  I can&#8217;t let this opportunity pass by so I must ask you, can I send you at least one of my stories? I don&#8217;t expect you to find a publisher for me but an opinion would be great, especially coming from a writer like yourself. Now, I&#8217;m really asking for too much but who knows you might say yes.</p>
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		<title>By: fsdthreshold</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-154</link>
		<dc:creator>fsdthreshold</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Jun 2008 05:29:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Carlos,
Well, it&#039;s hard for me to recommend specific magazines without knowing your work as you do. Have you looked at www.ralan.com? (I hope I&#039;ve got that right!) That&#039;s a site that lists a whole bunch of fantasy and horror markets.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carlos,<br />
Well, it&#8217;s hard for me to recommend specific magazines without knowing your work as you do. Have you looked at <a href="http://www.ralan.com?" rel="nofollow">http://www.ralan.com?</a> (I hope I&#8217;ve got that right!) That&#8217;s a site that lists a whole bunch of fantasy and horror markets.</p>
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		<title>By: Carlos</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-147</link>
		<dc:creator>Carlos</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 21:03:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I hope so. If you bump into one please let me know at guaraguo2@aol.com. I know is too much to ask but it doesn&#039;t hurt to ask. Thanks....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hope so. If you bump into one please let me know at <a href="mailto:guaraguo2@aol.com">guaraguo2@aol.com</a>. I know is too much to ask but it doesn&#8217;t hurt to ask. Thanks&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>By: fsdthreshold</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-146</link>
		<dc:creator>fsdthreshold</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 20:05:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Carlos,
If you&#039;re writing Twilight Zone-like stories, I still think there would be a magazine market out there somewhere that would be right for your work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carlos,<br />
If you&#8217;re writing Twilight Zone-like stories, I still think there would be a magazine market out there somewhere that would be right for your work.</p>
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		<title>By: Carlos</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-143</link>
		<dc:creator>Carlos</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Jun 2008 02:33:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fred,

Did I metion I write Twilight Zone like stories but even more horrorfying and deeper.  Nobody followed after Rod Sterling, nobody honored him with a publishing house?  If there is any I can&#039;t find it.  I&#039;m not giving up. A feeling inside tells that they will be publish.  I know you are familiar with that feeling.  Your suggestions and the way you sound keep me writing you back. You must has been an encorouging teacher.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fred,</p>
<p>Did I metion I write Twilight Zone like stories but even more horrorfying and deeper.  Nobody followed after Rod Sterling, nobody honored him with a publishing house?  If there is any I can&#8217;t find it.  I&#8217;m not giving up. A feeling inside tells that they will be publish.  I know you are familiar with that feeling.  Your suggestions and the way you sound keep me writing you back. You must has been an encorouging teacher.</p>
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		<title>By: fsdthreshold</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-141</link>
		<dc:creator>fsdthreshold</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jun 2008 17:44:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Carlos,
You&#039;re very welcome, and you don&#039;t seem to be either a bug or a fool! :-) It certainly doesn&#039;t hurt to try AH if you believe your work is just right for them. Meanwhile, please keep your eyes open for other markets you can try, too. There are magazines, anthologies, and more opportunities opening up in on-line publishing. If you&#039;re focusing on your craft and writing good stories, there&#039;s bound to be a market somewhere that they&#039;ll fit. Happy writing! (I guess we&#039;re all fools for doing it--so have fun being a fool, and don&#039;t give up.)
Fred</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Carlos,<br />
You&#8217;re very welcome, and you don&#8217;t seem to be either a bug or a fool! <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />  It certainly doesn&#8217;t hurt to try AH if you believe your work is just right for them. Meanwhile, please keep your eyes open for other markets you can try, too. There are magazines, anthologies, and more opportunities opening up in on-line publishing. If you&#8217;re focusing on your craft and writing good stories, there&#8217;s bound to be a market somewhere that they&#8217;ll fit. Happy writing! (I guess we&#8217;re all fools for doing it&#8211;so have fun being a fool, and don&#8217;t give up.)<br />
Fred</p>
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		<title>By: Carlos</title>
		<link>http://fredericsdurbin.wordpress.com/2008/05/06/float-like-a-butterfly-write-like-a-bee/#comment-136</link>
		<dc:creator>Carlos</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Jun 2008 03:56:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fred,

I&#039;m sorry to be a bug that doesn&#039;t go away.  AH sound like the only place that my stories could be published.  All these megazines are so espesific. I bought a few books from AH.  I think my next choise will be yours.  I will go away now.  I thank you for your time.  I will continue to be a fool.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fred,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m sorry to be a bug that doesn&#8217;t go away.  AH sound like the only place that my stories could be published.  All these megazines are so espesific. I bought a few books from AH.  I think my next choise will be yours.  I will go away now.  I thank you for your time.  I will continue to be a fool.</p>
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